Deborah RichardsDeborah Richards

Working Note

Last One Out is both typical and unique in its representation of my interests and concerns. It is typical in the sense that it reflects an on-going investigation in, what I like to describe as, the “ectopic presence” of the outsider who is out of place in his/her environment. Here the difference lies in the fact that Jane, though foreign, is more at home than the indigenous peoples in Africa. Jane’s initial role in Tarzan, the Ape Man, like any true explorer, is to identify and classify the local people according to the markings on shields and costume designs. This ritual completed, Jane is able to slot herself into the prime position of white lady who adds “color” to the drab African existence of the two white men.

Last One Out is a play, which is part closet drama (to be read), and part performance piece (to be elaborated into action). When I started, I had imagined an open text where the order of scenes and the decisions to perform/read sections would be left to the actor or the reader. Now, I imagine the reader/viewer as a voyeur to the action (and inaction) within the claustrophobic space of the African stage set. What keeps these characters together without the traditional roles of master and slave? The interactions between blacks and whites, like those relationships between the British and the natives in the Tarzn films, are (sado)masochistic, ritualistic and repetitive, and I am not sure what will break these patterns of behavior.

About the hats: I noticed in the film, Tarzan, the Ape Man, that the white men and Jane wore pith helmets—this is not surprising, I know—but when Jane loses her hat she becomes more human/e. Without her hat, she is lost to the jungle’s (dark) influence and to primitive (dark) desires that makes her live in the trees, wear a little loincloth, and reject civilization.

I’m currently doing more research on the history of headwear.

 

LAST ONE OUT


 

 

Last One Out

Characters:

Saidi: Black woman. Dressed niether to impress nor to seduce.

Riano: Black man. Dressed how a black man can. You decide.

Jane: White woman in a white hip slip.

Mr. Parker: Jane’s father, brown enough to be black, in khaki (with-a-long-a)

Harry: Mr. Parker’s business partner white and safari-clad.

Martin: white man, Harry’s old school pal likes the gals. Dressed smart in a safari shorts and jacket.

              /Note: Martin can be excluded, but it would be a shame/

 

Place:         STUDIO SET OF AFRICAN LOCATION
                      /INTERIOR/

Time:         NOW IN THE IMAGINATION

 

 

Preface:
Last One Out is a reading of the particulars (real and imagined)
of the European “explorers” who rarely feel foreign or outlandish
in a new environment.
This “dramatic poem” uses two of the Tarzan films of the

thirties as a base for the rituals of race and sexuality
in the claustrophobic space of the theatre.

 

 

 

Here are some other sources:

Burroughs, Edgar Rice. Tarzan of the Apes. New York: Signet Books, 1990.

Cheyfitz, Eric. The Poetics of Imperialism. Philadelphia: U of Pennsylvania P, 1997.

Conrad, Joseph. Heart of Darkness. ed. Ross C Murphin. Boston/NY: Bedford Books, 1996.

Goldstein, Lawrence. The American at the Movies. Ann Arbor: U of Michigan P, 1994.

Concerning Hats. NY: Waring Hat Manufacturing Corp., 1920.

 

H stands for Hat

 

THE HATS

Saidi speak the lines speak
Tarzan, the Ape Man (1932)
view review construe what you will 
remote to pause, to fast forward and to slow down. 

she wears   a hat he wears   a hat    he     wears a hat    he wears
a different hat because he's black

she wears a    hat when   she goes out   he wears a hat    in the
jungle his hat comes off  when he is attacked by   hippos his hat
stays on or   we wouldn't know    who loomed

what    do you   think riano    he wears a    fez-like hat    to show
his  status an identifier   but his hat is not    so brimful he does
not need a brim as   he is african    and able to withstand   the sun
as he’s   done   all his fun

though he has    a hat    he does not initiate    but it is a hat
which gives some    control over others   that's how    you keep
them at bay    give one a hat and    a whip   maybe   another
could get    when this one    has served    his usefulness and has
been killed by some   thing fierce or some   thing slippery or
jittery

o.k. the story of the hats

film:
pause

fast forward

play

slow motion

repeat

as

required

[hereinafter

//:]

 

MORE VOICES

Harry and Jane shout commands
shout, playing cards.

In the films the Africans usually respond quickly.
{insert film: freeze frame  black man in shorts  bare chest  hat? runs between
them and us  full on never off  a name at least  a gun to shoot
no scary markings}

Harry
O.K Riano, take him away.
Riano, let me have that rifle.
Riano, come pull my boots off.
Let’s see your hand.
How are the rest of the boys, Riano?
How are the rest of the boys, Riano?
What do you make of it, Riano?
What have you got?
You got your whip…give ‘em
something to think about.
Riano, come on.

Jane
Keep them going
Saidi give me a hand here.
Saidi tell the boys to take a rest.
Isn’t it your deal?
All right, Saidi.
Saidi have a boy start a fire.
Saidi tell the boys to bring
the ammunition up.
What have you got?
What’s the trouble Saidi?
Saidi?

game:
shuffle

deal

trump

deal

tally //:

//: until…

HAT DIRECTIVE 1

Riano speak phrases in order
wearing a baseball hat. The camera on him—
image displayed.

There are different rules in keeping with hat wearing. It’s in summer and a different in hearsay. In the warm old days, gentlemen always wore panama in the thoroughfare. Chronicle the sun out of my eyes… I’m not sure about this in the house. Other spaces have had this importance for the winter worn days. In the olden tales, heads had to be covered by a hat to
complete man’s wear. In the old days, I couldn’t, but now I think I look pretty good. By some places he wore hat.
Considered rude, I could see the women wore them too, but that’s another one. My narrative: wear a hat at all times. It keeps my head in.

film:

close up

mouth

eyes

nose

 

Riano:

hat

check hat

move hat

check hat

hat//:

 

 

 

 

{Synopsis: Tarzan, the Ape Man (1932)
Mr. Parker and his business partner, Harry, come up with a scheme:
1)    make money
2)    leave Africa’s impenetrable blackness[like frightened children].
They desire the riches of the elephants’ graveyard on the Mutia Escarpment.
They have the black men and the white will to succeed.
Before they leave Jane offers a reprieve
white skin among blacks’ backs}

 

 

 

Saidi zoom zooms/ in for body details  filming
next scene, honing Jane sex appeal
cleavage, neck, and mouth.

 

 

H stands for Home    

 

HOME TIME

Jane swing, swing swagger through the others
with heavy trunks—
her trunks. Speak Jane, breathily.


I feel so completely at home
I feel so
I feel completely
I feel so fresh
Clean
Completely at home
I am so complete
Clever
Completely white and brave
And so and so and so
I feel so
Home
It's completely
Seen
Your home hardly
My home
Completely
What do you mean
Oh
Oh

Jane:
dress

undress

discard

lean

show

dress

undress

discard

lean

show //:

 

 

 

 

Mr. Parker—plus safari hat—
come forward
map and check the setting.
Riano follow pocketed hands—no hat.
Harry—without hat—follow follow.
Martin—hatless too—follow follow follow everyone.


Parker/map:
check

fold

walk

 

Saidi/film:

view

pause

record

view  //:

check  //:

 

 

 

Dark Continent;
close around them

 

 

SAVAGED DESIRE AND DEATHS

Jane:    I didn’t know. I thought him
             a savage, but now I know
            differently.
Father: He’s barely human.
             A man like that.
Jane:     He’s one of us.
Father: He can’t be.
             He doesn’t have a hat.
Jane:    I could give him mine.
Father: You can’t, he’s a savage. //:

Saidi:
1 African sees the Escarpment then dies..
2 African falls off cliff. Poor Devil
3 African eaten by alligator.
4 African eaten by alligator .
5 African killed by pigmy arrow.
6 Pigmy shot in retaliation.
7 African drowned by Tarzan.
8 African killed, person unknown.
9 African killed by Tarzan.
10 African killed by a gorilla.

list:
check

check

check

check

check

//:

 

blackness
stretched

HAT EXCHANGE: GIRL GAINED

Riano, Harry and Martin approach Jane
and Mr. Parker. Jane look at them. Men
look at her.
Jane crotch watch—smile—her
face turned upward—smile—remove
hat—tease men— hovering hat head by head.
Mr. Parker intervene—replace hat on her head. Start game—blow blow whistle
signal.

game:
get hat

claim Jane

place hat on her head

win Jane

end game

 

 

 

 

[Before them stretched the broad Atlantic;
at their backs the Dark Continent;
close around them loomed
the impenetrable blackness of the jungle
(Tarzan of the Apes 152).]

 


Bio: Deborah Richards was born in London.  She currently lives in Philadelphia, PA, where she is a teacher and performer.  She received her MA from Temple University.

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